Poster Boy by Tracey Flynn Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Poster Boy by Tracey Flynn Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We felt this was a really visual piece and would attract a visual filmmaker. No dialogue seems to work with the character and story.
2. We felt you need to show how the character grows by the end of the piece. She is insular and closed, while the incident she has experienced wouldn't cause her to somehow change personalities, would she at least consider calling the number at the end?
Have your say, what do you think?