Dream Date by Anne-Marie Draycott & Charity Trimm Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Dream Date by Anne-Marie Draycott & Charity Trimm Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We liked this but did see it coming. What if the couple were not middle aged, middle class parents. What if it was a young couple that you think will fuck like rabbits. Joke is stronger
because it misdirects.
2. How else can you play with the scenario? Perhaps show the frenzy to get out of clothes.
Have your say, what do you think?