RETITLE: The Faded Rose by Andrew Turvil Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
On thy Cheeks a Fading Rose by Andrew Turvil Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We suggest you change the title of the film as it doesn’t sum up about the script is about. As the filmmakers come to the site and begin looking at the scripts, the first thing that will
attract them is the title.
2. It is worth noting that a filmmaker with a visual style might focus on the rose entirely and ignore dialogue – it might be worth you preempting this. Most of it is not central or useful to the story. Perhaps consider cutting it and finding other visually ways to show the journey of this rose?
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