The Moment by Stephen Cooper Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
The Moment by Stephen Cooper Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We liked the script and felt it was strong. However, you might want to have a look at the set up. Why is this man being tailed for a hit? Would setting this up add an element to the story not
there? I.E. Is this guy trying to talk himself out being killed? The set up doesn’t need to be dialogue based it could be something visual.
Have your say, what do you think?