Colton's Big Night by Nathan Gower Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Colton's Big Night by Nathan Gower Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We felt this was already a strong piece but would like you to reconsider the first scene. It is unlikely that the father would be encouraging of this romance knowing full well his son is
likely to get his heart broken. It might be that Colton prepares for the arrival of his babysitter himself, or we hear the parents going out off screen, whatever it is you decide to do try to
keep Colton in his own universe where a romance –however unlikely – is possible
Have your say, what do you think?