Neil by Nigel Karikari Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Neil by Nigel Karikari Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We liked this script, thought it was a good idea well executed. You might want to consider taking the explicit crying instruction out. Let the actor show the emotions the character is feeling
on their face.
2. You might want to consider having the woman be questioned about her experience rather than fill in a form. This way the audience gets to hear what she is being asked and why she is showing her emotions.
Have your say, what do you think?