Oats & Honey by Rishi Vaja

A market stall trader finds love in extraordinary circumstances
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Comments: 13
  • #1

    Elaine (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:11)

    Wow, it starts off as a gentle story then accelerates into violence and chaos. Interesting.

  • #2

    Phil (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:25)

    Kept me interested 'till the end, good job

  • #3

    J Westside (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:26)

    Gripping stuff! This guy is going to be huge!

  • #4

    Terry (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:38)

    Absolutely awesome scriptwriting. Bravo.

  • #5

    Ramin (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:42)

    Like it, nice twist at the end. Is this the same guy who wrote 'Depth Charge'?

  • #6

    Dixita (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:59)

    Fantastic script and I just wanted to find out what happens at the end. Also very romantic! It's like as the riot became more intense, so did their love.

  • #7

    Bav (Friday, 27 July 2012 12:07)

    The author has used his craft to beguiling effect, a compelling script that intrigues until the very last word... great stuff!

  • #8

    Pio (Friday, 27 July 2012 13:26)

    This is excellent! A great read, especially with a cup of hot chai!

  • #9

    francesca (Friday, 27 July 2012 14:31)

    nice, nice, nice! romantic view of love far away from clichè!

  • #10

    Tom P (Saturday, 28 July 2012 14:45)

    Top work

  • #11

    Asha (Sunday, 29 July 2012 01:57)

    Superbly written!

  • #12

    Stephen B (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 18:13)

    I really liked this one. It starts out quite kitchen sink but then builds to a thrilling and romantic cresendo. Notting Hill meets the Hackney Riots!

  • #13

    Craig P (Friday, 03 August 2012 13:32)

    I think the only reason this didn't get through was because of the firebombing and riot police challenge in regards to the film making.

    Really liked the ending - in the pandemonium that he still wished her happy valentines day.