HE by Paul Holbrook

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Robert's mind is broken. Being witness to evil changed him.
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Comments: 6
  • #1

    Steven JC Johnson (Friday, 20 July 2012 18:15)

    Wow! That was quite a read. Great visuals and a good 'Hammer House of Horror' vibe. Nice one. :)

  • #2

    SCOTT DUKE (Friday, 20 July 2012 19:52)

    aGAIN, THE IMAGERY IS PRETTY AWESOME! iT'S A SHAME THIS DIDN'T GET PICKED, WOULD HAVE LIKED TO WATCH THIS!!! VERY GOOD!

  • #3

    Jaye (Saturday, 21 July 2012 17:47)

    Blimey! (actually I used a swear word but didn't want to put that on here)

    Blimey, the ending! *shudders*

    How you didn't get selected beats me.

  • #4

    Paul Holbrook (Saturday, 21 July 2012 19:33)

    Thanks guys.

  • #5

    Pete (Sunday, 22 July 2012 14:03)

    Great concept and tone. I think too much dialogue probably let you down. The psychiatrist's dialogue could have been cut by at least half. Also maybe the valentine's day setting wasn't emphasised enough? Could have had the doctor mention it as part of his dialogue.

  • #6

    Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 14:53)

    Blimey, WTF is all I can say. That's disturbingly.... undescribable!