Stranger by Stephanie Van Driel

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A child is abducted, something precious is lost and the stranger is not what he seems.
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    Milethia (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 21:58)

    This is a different take on the valentine's theme. Written well. The twist is good at the end. I was wondering where the short was going - a little worried for the boy - but, phew!, all was okay.

    You do use CLOSE UP and POV, which should be avoided when writing a screenplay.

    It's enough to write, for example -

    AIRPORT TERMINALS

    1, 2, 3

    Perhaps the varied settings went against this advancing - if filmed by folk with little or no budget - but the concept is good.

    All the best.