Elegy by Chris Townsend

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A couples valentines day dinner is not what it seems as we learn the man has suffered a painful loss and only one miracle drug can help him cope.
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Comments: 3
  • #1

    Rachel McAdam (Friday, 27 July 2012 18:32)

    Goodness that was sad. Think 2500 people would be an underestimate if the pill worked that well! Really liked this script.

  • #2

    Milethia (Friday, 27 July 2012 23:22)

    Good concept. Original.

    A minor thing, but you say - 'A man in his late twenties.' Really, you should name FREDDIE immediately, so something like - 'FREDDIE (late 20s).

    You should also lay your montage out something like -

    MONTAGE - (title of your montage)

    -shot

    -shot


    END MONTAGE
    Or BACK TO SCENE

  • #3

    Chris Townsend (Thursday, 02 August 2012 23:24)

    Cool guys, thanks for the feedback. It's actually an idea for a longer piece I have written and am hopefully filming later this year. It was a pretty huge thing to fit into 2 pages! Those small alterations/feedback are most apprectiated :)