'Boxes' by Stormdrain Films
Cast Mark Morris, Samantha Storey and the voice of Sara Dee. Music "Middle earth" Pierre Langer Unique tracks Production music library. Email: firstname.lastname@example.org Produced and Directed by Mark Morris (Stormdrain films) - for "FIFTY KISSES" feature film.
First Cut Comments... have YOUR say!
Read 'Boxes' HERE
First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers
- The music feels too big and dominating.
- Trim, trim, trim… for instance, you could easily trim 5 seconds of him climbing the ladder. Drop a whole minute by doing this.
- Loose dissolve at 40 seconds, you don’t need it and dissolves lack confidence.
- Bigger sound effect for his fall, to sell the ‘death’
- Again try without dissolves
- Try music that is not so dominating